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Custody their deadiest and strongest mage Arthur Magnus claims im for California his own In the Empire mages are bonded with latents to be used for their power Magnus pisses Nicky off right from the very beginning whene wakes up to find that not only is Afgantsy he already forcibly bonded butis name in the Empire Distant Early Warning (Star Trek (Star Trek: S.C.E., has been changed to Neko laus MagnusThis storyas a wonderful mix of the relationship between Nicky and Magnus and other characters Plus the worlds and backgrounds are used artfully to enrich the story without overpowering things There s really funny moments because Nicky Somnium has a great personality and a big mouth there s also very intense ones because of the situations they faceIighly suggest that everyone give it a try it s currently free When I finished v1 I couldn t wait to continueOne side note there are some typos and grammar mistakes but since its free online fiction I didn t The Cronos Complex I hold it against the author Iated the name it s a pun on is nickname Neko which I coincidentally also ate with Maid of Dishonor (The Wedding Season, his name Nicholas which I might appreciate but I don t because it s awkward asell to pronounce even mentally There were a lot of elements in the story that were really interesting like the magic system I always love a good magic system or the complexity of the MCs gotta love a good MC but there were a lot of little uirks that brought the rating down low It rambles it yawns it can t get it s story straight it stops abruptly in the middle of sentences never to finish it skips entire words in a sentence it as loads of minor errors which is lucidly indicative of no to little editing It s free and unpublished so it s not like there s no excuse but to this extent it effects the overall story Great book love the pace I m addicted to your books They are not coming fast enough 35 star. That irritates mostWhen these two meet sparks fly literallyWill their meeting be the best thing for them both and turn them into a force that will stop the Empire or will they burn each other out online fiction COMPLET.
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Ho don t know neko is the japanese word for cat and the laus brings to my mind Santa Claus Least to say its an odd title that might push many awayAnd that would be a shame because this is a gem of a find and I m surprised its not one of the titles that the author as chosen to re edit and publish In my opinion this series is far superior to Heart Beat her published seriesThe story introduces you to Nicholas Nicky whoas become a small gang leader in a place called the Shambles which brings to mind a futuristic post war world where government is non existant and instead gangs control their areas and gang leaders are similar to tribe leaders that protect their men and their land Nicky is uniue in the fact that The Site Book he s a latent which is a person who can see store and control the flow of power in the world Latents are prized for their usage in powering mage s magic so their sought after by the EmpireThe Empire is described as a technologically advanced portion of society they control a place just called the city on Nicky s planet possibly from another world that can space travel and that raise mages as their primary weapons They periodically come to Nicky s side of the world to poach people especially children who show any signs ofaving latent talents The only reason Nicky was missed in one of their sweeps when The Devils Possession he was young was because ofis other secret Betraying Beauty (Vegas Titans, he comes from a place called the Wild which is an area onis planet that is not touched by the gangs because its known for its wilderness and wild tribes of people that protect it Even the Empire Vrolok has trouble going into the Wild so they rarely are able to test the people who live there for any latent abilityNicky is captured by the Empire because of the stupidity and betrayal of a former loverOnce the Empireas taken Nicky into. Ll cost and fight for survival every dayMagnus is the Empire's deadliest mage who goes through latents like disposable batteries Privileged and pampered by the Empire Magnus as an air of entitlement and self importance.
I give this book 2 stars instead of of one just because I already read other books from this author and they were orrid no kidding So this book as terrible as it is is much better than Blood Nation In both books the author good creativity made The Boy Who Would Not Say His Name her write a interesting situation spoiled later byer writingI learned english few years ago and I think I could write better than Job-Hunting for the So-Called Handicapped her And if the terrible grammar and simplistic sentences are not enought to stop you and normally not me thenere for you one of the worst world and characters build ever Characters are plain and I seriously doubt that the one who gave them life ever The Hunger Within heard about coherent behaviourIt escapes meow this many people Between Two Skies had the guts to give thisorror 4 or even 5 stars I m starting to believe that aliens really exist and take away brains and eyesSummarizing it all this book general idea isn t bad and it could Witch-Hunting in Seventeenth-Century New England have been great if a true author someone with a bit of writing skillsad wrote it This is science fiction that reads like a fantasy at times Nicky is from the wilds of Nude Girls Photography Presents Ass Pussy From Behind - Compilation Vol. 5 his planet The Empireas never been able to conuer The Dolce Diet his pre technological society because of the Witches there Nicky is a Latent a conduit of nearly unlimited power for anyone who works magic The Empire in this book is cast from a familiar mold Greedy brutal and relentless Between the Wilds and the Empire is a kind of scavenging buffer society called the Shambles Nicky commits a murder and escapes to the Shambles to become a crime lord type thug despiteis youthI really enjoyed Brave Enough how over the top and imaginative this book is And it s free It s every bit as good as the author s pub Great story 45 Stars This story surprised me in many ways At first the title alone kind of pushed me off because of the silliness of it For those Nicky is a rare thing a latent which makesim into an unending power source for all things and people magical He came from an area called the Wild and grew up in the Shambles where Spunk he learned toide is abilities at
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