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Ts is to be dominated and feel wned and that s why his gentle faux boyfriend act hasn t worked so far Uh what the fuck Isn t the problem that you bought yourself a slave and pretended you had a mutual relationship in the first place you dumb fuck Yes I m mad Because what do you know this wasn t a deconstruction after all It s exactly as advertised In the end ur hero gets an incredible pportunity but doesn t take it because he s learned how sweet it is to submit to his gentle master and he d rather stay with him thank you very much The guy could ve gotten his freedom Enough money to start his Indiscretion own life Maybe rescue his sisters from slavery Even the choice to keep fucking that bastard if he wanted But no I could barely read the final chapter I was too busy throwing up in my mouth Fuck everything and fuck this book MM slave story not for everyone There s some pretty dark and graphic non con sex scenes but it gets the point across as to how hopeless Nicholi s future is His desire for vengeance against the soldier responsible for killing his family and selling him into slavery is thenly thing that keeps him goingI can enjoy the Indiscretion occasionally well written mm romance but I much prefer something dark and angsty This definitely delivered almost getting a bit too depressing for me I simply didn t see how Nicholi would be able to improve his situation I don t like spoilers so won t say anything than that the end was satisfying On some level I think I might recommend this bookn its erotic content alone The BDSM in here is wicked and lascivious whips chains plugs gangbangs the whole nine yards and yet it always feels really fresh and engaging instead f shallow and perfunctory Bookmark those chapters you ll want to revisit themBut there s uite a lot about Nicholi s Vengeance that I liked ther than its sexy sexy sex which actually surprised me a little because Soul Dust on its surface there s a lot going against itn my personal list The Dyfed Enigma: Unidentified Flying Objects in West Wales of pet peeves The whole palace harem setting is a little bland and prosaic at this point ifnly because there s barely ever anything different about it from 6S: The 6S Review, Issue 2 one book to the next Double pointsff for the stock Blackbird overused big dark skinned veteran slave trope The way that everything resolves if it could be called a resolution may be pretty unsatisfying Moreover there s nothing particularly memorabler notable about the narrative style in generalBut I uite liked the characters Good guys bad guys sycophants bullies soldiers performers there s uite a host Midwest Maize: How Corn Shaped the U.S. Heartland of fairly notable characters in this book and I felt satisfied by them all In particular I was very fondf Surly Bonds our protagonist Nicki and I think what ultimately made me so fondf him was thatwell he wasn t stupid For all that he d been forced into an awful situation by awful people for all that his entire raison d etre was to satisfy his fiery vendetta against his nemesis in spite Sex, Lies, and Videotape of all his anxiety and desperation Nicki remains in controlf his senses and rationale and is never that hotheaded The Sanford Guide to Hepatitis Therapy 2016-2017 or even particularly reckless about his lot thereby never making anything far worse for himself I can t tell you how sick to death I amf asinine slave boys who don t seem to have any filters whatsoever act Syzygy: Reflections on the Monastery of the Seven Rays out emotionally in ways that are completely unhelpful to themselves and can t rub two brain cells together to solve theirwn problems Not so for Nicki He s not exactly some ice cold unfeeling robot without an impulsive bone in his body but he s rational Even when he s acting purely n emotion particularly near the climax f the story he nonetheless remains cognizant Whore Stories: A Revealing History of the World's Oldest Profession of his actions and the conseuences thereofYes good give that to me Give me all the desperate hapless slave boys abuse them and molest themver and The Paper Wife over again force them in wayver their heads with little choice r agency about their lotand make them cunning and levelheaded instead f frustratingly harebrained about it That s all I want any We, the People: Of Earth Elders other pet peeves be damnedThe thing I will say against this book is that while it does great work getting me to root for Nicki it unfortunately loses me uite a lot when it starts to get philosophical and profound about Nicki s situation particularly what slavery and freedom actually means for him Several times through the coursef his story Nicki wonders if slavery is merely a state Black Marxism: The Making of the Black Radical Tradition of mind a mere semantic construct that has no basisn your livelihood that some slaves could actually be freer than free men who might not be free after allI ll grant that it s an interesting thes. 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Ug All I can say is that I wanted Niki to fall in love with Tarc dangit And it s a LONG book until u finally meet who he does fall for but it doesn t go into deep romance there eitheroh well firstly I m french so sorry for the mistakes I read Pathfinder and it was OK but this book is worse than worse this is horrible from start to finish This book is not credible spoiler The young man saw his family and his village burn However when the man who did it began to rape him he get hard and cum yeahfor someone who has seen everyone die he is really uiet and feels no sorrowthroughout the book Nicholi is raped and beaten betrayed by his friends Everyone told him to accept his fate it s frustrating Then he is sold to someone nicer but this man does not hesitate to abuse him too and when Nicholi is not in love with him he is not happy this man buys slaves to save them but he puts them in his bed it s not love but abuse f weakness for methroughout the book Nicholi wants to avenge himself and I can understand But when he has the pportunity it does nothing not even a cry no insult no shots but he speaks almost gently with the man responsible for the death f the whole village and at the end he returns with his new master happy This book does not have any logic to me This book is The Windy Season only suffering sadism and cruelty perversion I suffered from beginning to end and the end disappointed me I wanted to throw my Kindle against the wall if I could I would burn this book to ash What the hell What the everloving fuck was that I just read I m feeling tricked TRICKED Here I am happily reading along thinking I m reading a clever deconstructionf the tired reluctant slave with a kind master trope when the story suddenly turns around and slaps me in the face with some Oldies but Goodies of that sweet 1984 wisdom WAR IS PEACE FREEDOM IS SLAVERY IGNORANCE IS STRENGTH RAPE IS LOVESo here s this guy right Age unspecified but I m thinking late teensr younger his siblings are said to be prepubescent and it s never inferred that he s that much A Month of Sundays older Anyhow war comes to town andur guy is thrust into slavery Since he s the prettiest thing around this means Evangeline, a Master For Tonight Companion Novel our hero is going to find himself the targetf innumerable non consensual cocks all aimed in his direction Pretty standard rightWhat makes the following rapefest interesting than most is the fact that Beneath the Jolly Roger our hero stays unbroken and secretly mad as hell all the way through it When his half assed escape plan lands him in even worse circumstances than before things look kindf grim But then Lo and behold for here s the Kind Master coming to take Merzbook: The Pleasuredome of Noise our hero away from the bad guys and teach him all about the joysf submission and the Healing Cock To clarify this is where I thought I was reading a deconstruction Why would I even think that you ask Well because the presentation made it pretty clear in my eyes that this particular Master was a creepy piece f shit who preyed n the weak in Pig order to stroke hiswn ego So Scipio Rising (Scipio Africanus our hero is bought by this guy the leaderf a travelling circus given food and clothes and much needed rest and when the guy also wants him to get naked under the covers and nicely asks him to suck his cock well there s not really any room to refuse is there Turns ut this guy used to have another slave who was also rescued from circumstances similar to ur hero s This poor abused fucker apparently fell in love with the sweet master ut f undying gratitude and numerous sessions with the healing cock and then sadly fell They Also Serve off a horse and died So Master guy isut looking for a replacement to relive this little fantasy with when he stumbles n ur hero Oh yes Here s another young abused thing ripe for the picking and cock healing But wait Master guy prefers his relationships to be consensual That s why he ll ask nicely for his cock to be sucked and not simply No Time for Sergeants order it even if there isn t actually a difference Considering the slavery thing and all To put it simply Master guy wants a mutual relationship except he doesn t not really because then he could just get a fucking boyfriend and not buy up abused slaves who can t tell him no becausef the vast power differential Anyhow I was feeling somewhat hopeful because for a while it looked like ur hero wasn t buying into this emotional manipulation shit Which made Master guy all kinds f confused because why didn t ur hero love him The previous guy did after all There s a truly stomach turning scene where Master guy comes up with the theory that maybe what ur hero truly wan. Nicholi's world goes up in flames when soldiers invade his country leaving chaos in their wake Captured and enslaved in a foreign land Nicholi struggles to cope with the nightmare f slavery and adapt to the terrifying and inexplicable world
Isexcept Nicki comes to this line f thought after Large Catechism of Martin Luther observing free prostitutes in the dingy back alleysf the city and it s likeum yeah sure Junior Jolt of course some formsf slavery might not seem that bad when you compare and contrast it against the utter worst situations a free man might find himself in But that doesn t make slavery better all that means is someone else might possibly have it as bad as you What if you compare yourself against a blacksmith Ceux de la posie vcue or a fishermanr a carpenter does your slavery still seem very free The exchange reminded me f that uirky Doctor Who scene where some bad guy asks the Doctor if slaves are truly slaves if they don t think they re slaves to which the Doctor replies instantly without hesitation a bit exasperatedly yes yes f course they are Part f the reason I considered the ending kinda unsatisfying is because view spoilerit hinges pretty acutely n this kind Troublemaker:: One Man's Crusade Against China's Cruelty of mindset Nicki s lot has becomes so good that even if he s still a slave it snly a technicality and in practice he s not actually a slave at all Okay great but that s tireless: only because he personally managed to wrangle himself into an extraordinarily fortunate circumstance in comparison withther slaves It certainly doesn t make slavery any better in this setting hide spoiler I really enjoyed the story there were some really sweet scenes and it held my interest throughout However things really didn t go the way I selfishly wanted them to to go I thought Taric was a great character and I loved the first part Teach Them Spanish!, Grade 1 of the book and his time with Nicholi I then spent the restf the book waiting for him to make an appearance and when he finally did turn up I was disappointed Not the book for me I guessYou know there s a problem when you have a medieval esue world with lube and super advanced sex toys And antiseptics and piercingsIt basically just becomes a B rated historical themed pornoWhich is unfortunately what happened with this Toque de Veludo oneNick s a fairlybviously a Mary Sue from fairly early n I never really empathize with him and thus I don t really care what happens to them Any real sense f vengeance was fleeting at best and seemed to dissipate completely after his first cocking A lot ends up happening to him at him and while I get that there s Kaleidoscope only so much he can do it s fairly annoying There s no tension just bad sex that reads like going through the motions than anythingI never really got a sensef Nicki what kind The Four Racketeers of nickname for Nicholi is that I m sorry but I just have something against it either his personalityr his supposed anger DNF about 27%I couldn t feel any deep emotions ut f the characters and so I couldn t really evoke any deep emotions in me regarding this book Although there might have been something akin to pity and disappointmentI want to say there are scenes I liked but I can t recall Phantoms Monsters: Mysterious Encounters one There were some I thought werekay but not I really liked which makes me sad since I was kind Smithereens of excited about this bookshrug It might be that it s just not the book for me Other people might like it DNF Might re attempt Main character stepping allver my pet peeveI could not finish it Stuck at 20% The characters was pissing me The Book of Not Knowing: Exploring the True Nature of Self, Mind, and Consciousness off That MC should be wearing a skirt Oh gawd his whining is particularly nerve grating Yes unfortunately this book has triggeredne Dark Diversions of my biggest pet peeve whinny characters especially main charactersI might try to pick it up againne fine day maybe just maybe It s not healthy to wish for those brutes that captured the MC earlier had cut his throat instead Lili a un chagrin d'amour of letting himff OK could I be excited This Yamashita's Ghost: War Crimes, Macarthur's Justice, and Command Accountability one s blurb makes it sound similar to Bloodraven and now I cannot wait for it to be released Allf you DMC ers hope this is a good ne One young man whose live is dramatically altered with the murder f his family and the razing f his village goes through a series f events powered nly by his need for vengeance Nicholi is a than a bit back and forth in mood and intentions as he learns to accept his slavery Sure there s pony boys piercing whippings and a never ending ueue f cocks to be serviced Even though some Lord of The Heart: Regency Romance of these events are harsh the effect is blunted because the reader is always inside Nicholi s head and his mind wanders in circular arguments even when you think he might be to preoccupied by what s happening to his physical body you end up taking a little brain wander For my friendsut there wondering this is no Bloodraven There is a sweetness to the story between harsh scenes there is succor for Nicholi. 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