Ebook read Sorry is the Magic Word by M.A. Jackson – dedelicate.com
I didn t like this story but I am giving it 4 stars for the writing I think the author did a good job and my problem was with the prompt than the writing The prompt sounded alright But eading it over it places far too much blame on the Dom And the author did to eualize the blame than the prompt And I think the author did a moderately good job writing a Femmes, si vous saviez... : 83 questions-rponses, hormones, mnopause, ostoporose relationship a BDSM world and some concept of BDSM I don t totally agree with her concept butealistic than a lot of BDSM writing And there weren t noticeable flaws in writingI could imagine a sub acting the way Dylan acted And a Dom does have a The Kaya-Girl responsibility not to push their sub too far And to talk to them before ending a scene This was a major failure of communication However the sub also has aesponsibility to communicate when he is uncomfortable And to follow the contract not leave in anger And it wasn t clear to me that either member of this elationship understood where things went wrong or adeuately apologized And the story also made. Dear AuthorI am a Dom who blew it with my boy; see the picture and you will see I sent him to the corner for punishment out in my backyard Unfortunately when I did that some friends of mine and some of his friends were there also for a BB party After the party was over he left and it has been five days He isn’t with any of his friends or his family and I am worried I have tried calling him emailing him and texting him but no esponse I finally got a clue I emembered him telling me about a chance to be a counselor and trainer.
Ing that your view might be different than others It is possible to have TPE without the humiliation aspect Gillibrand from Fun With Dick and Shane is in a TPE elationship and he is not purposely humiliated and that is a true story Your story sounds Graeco-Egyptian Magick really sweet to me actually like the dom actually thinks about his sub as a human being capable of emotions There are times for total dominance and submission and times when exhibiting that may not be appropriate Let me explainNo There is too much Let me sum up Inigo MMisunderstandings poor planning and acting before thinking I have a hard time enjoying stories based on miscommunication Add in theetrospective chunk of time that predominates the story and we end up spending only a few paragraphs at the beginning and a few at the end with the characters actually occupying the same space I just had a difficult time connecting with the characters and their elationship On the upside I liked the mentoringsupport aspect to Dylan and Bryan s community. Ce Group's Love’s Landscapes event Group members were asked to write a story prompt inspired by a photo of their choice Authors of the group selected a photo and prompt that spoke to them and wrote a short story This story may contain sexually explicit content and is intended for adult eaders It may contain content that is disagreeable or distressing to some eaders The MM Romance Group strongly ecommends that each eader eview the General Information section before each story for story tags as well as for content warnings.
Summary Sorry is the Magic Word
Ebook ead Sorry is the Magic Word by M.A. Jackson – dedelicate.com
A big deal about the eason why Dylan was punished which I felt was arguable an appropriate eason but also clearly an excuse for what Bryan felt was a pre planned sceneSo eally this wasn t good for me at all in the BDSM story But the writing was fine and I d like to see from Ms Jackson Enjoyable short story good writing and I loved the pic and prompt Many thanks to the author for participating in the Love s Landscapes event This was an enjoyable change of pace the two MCs spend 99% of the story apart as they eflect on their elationship and communication I wouldn t want every story I ead to be like this but once in a while it s nice 35 stars Dear MA JacksonI would send this personally but as you aren t a Goodreads Author you don t have a message option Sorry is the magic word I am SO sorry for how some people are treating you with this story If people don t like it that s fine but they don t need to get mad at you for following the prompt especially when you gave a warning at the beginn. At an intense tennis camp where they are not allowed to have any contact with anyone except for emergencies The camp ends next week Friday will he come back to me or by humiliating him did I lose him for good I love him Please write this story and let him know I love himPhoto Description A young man stands facing a wooden privacy fence arms aised behind his head He wears a flipped sun visor no shirt and his white shorts are pulled low exposing his muscled back and tanned bottomThis story was written as a part of the MM Roman.